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Basically- my AP Language instructor is not a teacher. She holds us to the end of the year standard from the beginning and does not offer advise on a final draft or practice specific techiques in class. So in an effort to maintain my rank in the class (1), I need some help.
This is not a homework section, I know, but considering this is supposd to be a college level paper I think it is not to unreasonable to ask for a few comments.
That said- here is my definition paper on the concept "leader". Please tell me what I could consider revising (sentance structure, active versus passive verbs, that sorta deal), without dropping any altogether.
Thanks in advance. :)
(note(s): this paper lacks italics as viewable in MS Word, which carried voice quite well, but other than that- will not be missed. Sorry for spelling errors.)
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